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lets re-write this

Written by tzhavile from the blog lets re-write this on 12 Jul 2010
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Now that Phillip is gone and Zakumi went awol, it back to business as usual.

I was flabbagersted to see so many responses on the Generations blog with less that a week of release; for which 90% of them were all about what bloggers do best: critisize! 

From these criticisms, i took it upon myself to grant the bloggers an opportunity to re-write or take over the current storyline of any soapies/drama that you are watching at the moment. (who knows, maybe Mfundi might actually pay you for it one day).

My idea was planted by a blogger who showed us how he/she/shim would re-write Move- and- ngo (Muvhango), after some people critisized it to an extent that they even said a blank screen would be a perfect substitute Muvhango. 

For example, here is how i would take over the current storyline from Muvhango:

Scene 1: In the Bedroom, Vho-Masindi is busy cuddling with Vho- Khotsimunene when Susan steps in holding a tray! Alas! the secret is out, Vho-Masindi has been sleeping with Vho-Khotsimune just so he could side with her to let Lufuno become the next khadzi of Thathe. 

By this time, Susan has an upper hand against her mother in law who made her suffer ever since she laid her eyes on Azwinndini. Susan uses this power to let Vho- Masindi accept Agnes back in the family- Masindi is reluctant as she hates Agnes with passion.

During the 'Khadziship' ceremony, Susan interrupts the ceremony as she walks in with Agnes. She tells Vho-Masindi to re-instate Agnes as the Khadzi. Torn between the the love for her daughter and the secret affair with the Vho- Khotsimunene, Masindi doenst know what to do and before anybody could intervene, hot klaps are flying between Agnes, Lufuno and Susan who is tryin to protect Agnes.

Masindi tries to intervene, out of fury, Susan announces the affair in a heated argument with Masindi (in front of all visitors). Masindi is banished together with Vho -Khotsimunene (and one ther Khotsimunene who was also having an affair with Vho-Masindi without the knowledge of the other) to a land far away from acting.

Scene 2: In the office, Thandaza (with skirt lifted to her hips) is sitting over Ranthumeng, they are kissing passionatly (think midday snack in the office) when Pheko walks in! he is back for good.

Meme also walks in; she is delighted to knowing that she can spite Thandaza by having what Thandaza has always wanted: Pheko. Thanda is not moved at all, tells Pheko she now has Rantumeng and have since moved on with her life.

While Meme is busy Qoming, Pheko isnt interested in Meme- he got a secret: he has left behind a lady in Lesotho. The lady got class, succesful and very sophisticated (played by Xolile Tshabalala or Connie *hides from the connie issue though*). and she is in town to claim whats hers! as well as other business ventures.

Meme is deranged and jus off the cliff! breaks both legs! she is sent to the world unknown. Meanwhile Masase and Mukwevho Milling looses a bid that would have boosted their financial woes!

They loose to a new company now own by Doobsie (played by Khabonina) and Humbulani (Florence masebe)- them Bitc*es are back in tow and they mean biz!

Now Bloggers, how would you for instance write a grand exit for Karabo? the David Genaro saga on Rhythm City?? the Matabane household?? how would you takeover the current storylines??




6 Comments

tzhavile
12 Jul 2010 14:11

a zi she ke!

tzhavile
12 Jul 2010 14:13

and sorry for the errors in the last two paras- had to run!

maud
12 Jul 2010 14:17

tzhavile - cant this wait for Tuesday ?

GML
12 Jul 2010 14:22

Why Tuesday Maud?

Msoe
12 Jul 2010 14:24

K, let me think.

makisto
12 Jul 2010 14:39

My idea was planted by a blogger who showed us how he/she/shim would re-write Move- and- ngo
lol, that was me and definitely a he. 
who knows, maybe Mfundi might actually pay you for it one day
Lol, like I said in my blog, Muvhango seems to me that it's a family show = watched by everyone at home without the parents being embarrassed by lifted skirts.
If you really would like to get your ideas commissioned, I think you need to let the characters stay true to who they are and project your ideas within the scope of the show. Kante again, this is just for fun and not meant for commissioning lol. I must say though I love the Vho-Masindi seeing Vho-Borosi lol.


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