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Written by Vutmi from the blog Story Book on 23 Feb 2008
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OKAY!!!!

The adventures of Carlita got offhand and the producers decided to create a spin-off series of the show. The spinoff is set in a place far, far, far away from all PAradise land(where The adventures of Carlita were set). Only one character Mandla made it to the new series. He changed his name to Angelou and got over the trauma of being raped by Rejoice.

Lets take it from there...

Please be gentle...

52 Comments

Toxic
22 Feb 2008 08:45

can't wait......

Vutmi
22 Feb 2008 08:47

BTW: Mandla is now a masseuse ....maybe not; i c all those naughty minds working overtime. Somebody please suggest Mandla/Angelou's proffesion that wont require him touching people's bodies.

faraimagic
22 Feb 2008 08:59

mmmmhhh!

Golden Star
22 Feb 2008 10:06

Mandla/Angelou has decided to toughen up and is now a PA/sidekick to Mr Bhodloza Zungu a businessman who owns a shisanyama and a scrap yard. Much like what Slu of Isidingo is to Papa G. Angelou's extremely neat and dresses well and will never miss church (Zion) on Sundays for anything.

Nonny
23 Feb 2008 01:40

I am loving ur storyline Golden Star, I can't wait for Monday, so the creativity can begin!!!

mabhebheza
23 Feb 2008 01:44

Morning Buzum ...!! nawe ur here this morning!...are u watching the repeats of Carlita's adventure nah?

mabhebheza
23 Feb 2008 01:47

oh Its a new season of the story ok.....yepee only Mandla made it my Character im genius ..when are the Awards 4best Actor ? hi hi hi

Nonny
23 Feb 2008 02:18

LOL at Mabhebheza, yazi wena............plz my friend let us leave the story for Monday coz vele you know that with me and u here, if we take it on it's gonna go in another direction and we don't want that, now do we???/...........LOL

mabhebheza
23 Feb 2008 11:50

Mandla sits @hoe thinkin how lifeless he is on Saaturday nite all his friends have gone out and he is yet here he is sippin a Savvana and bloggin,,,suddenly!!

KeleFabulous
24 Feb 2008 12:21

One day while at church Mandla bumps into Mr Bodloza with his wife, Mystique, and is taken and overwhelmed at her beauty. Mandla can't keep his eyes off her as he's busy talking gadknowswhat with Mr Bodloza. There's something about Mystique, she seems to be drowning in unhappiness. Mandla can't help but wonder if Mr Bodloza has anything to do with it and wants badly to take that look away from her face...

Toxic
25 Feb 2008 00:53

Mystique is in turmoil and cannot think of a way out of this situation she finds herself in. She's looking for a way out but she knows that her past cannot be shaken away and is fast catching up on her. She feels intense loathing for Jabu Bodloza but has to remain married to him so this new life of hers remains believable. What is she going to do and what if that loud-mouth open her mouth about her past???

Vutmi
25 Feb 2008 01:37

Cont from Toxic
And whats with the new boy staring at her? He makes her feel so uncomfortable. Does he know my secret? she asks herself. No, he cant possibly know. she assures herself. she continues shaking hands and making small talks with other members of the congregations. but her mind is not there. she cant even hear herself. is like someone took over her body. She quickly steals a look at where her husband is standing with Mandla and she catches him staring at her again.

monwy
25 Feb 2008 01:43

please help. ndilahlekile

MamaOmpha
25 Feb 2008 01:51

HI GUYS

Vutmi
25 Feb 2008 01:57

Hi MamaOmpha welcome to *untitled* (still waiting for the tittle, from our creative team). pls feel free to add your story line.

Kim Possible
25 Feb 2008 01:59

Cont from Vutmi
Bhodloza also looked at his wife saying to Mandla, come there is someone i'd like you to meet...... Honey , come over please , waving a hand to his wife and also sharing a smile with her......but for her that was not a smile but a grin.....Oh Lawd why is he calling me now-*thought running in her mind* - Hun this is my right hand man i've been telling you about and Mandla please meet my wife......Mandla is this.....no it cant be *thoughts running in his mind* , oh Gaawd gracious no no...her face drooping.......What's the matter Darling.......

Potash
25 Feb 2008 02:20

Cont frm Kim possible

Mustyque: (thinking to herself) "Let me pinch myself...is it really him. Noooooooooo It cant be him, wake up, wake up Mystique you probly dreaming"
Bhodloza: " DArling are you alright, u seem like you have seen a ghost"
Mandla: (thinking to himself) "Bhodloza's wife sure looks familiar, have I seen her b4, many years ago perhaps"

Vutmi
25 Feb 2008 04:09

cont from Potash
Mystique:(i suppose the only way to find out if its him is by asking) Hello nice to meet you Angelou.
Mandla/Angleou: great to finally meet you too Ms Bhodloza, i only heard good things about you.
Mystique: Dont mean to be forwad Angelou, but you look so familiar...(then it hit her)... now i remember where i saw you. You were working at an Apartment block where my friend was staying in Paradise Land were'nt you?
MAndla: eh..eh..m...yes!
Mr Bhodloza: What were you doing there dear? PAradise land is far, far, far, away from here.
Mystique(flushed): I...I...I visited a friend of mine.
Mr Bhondloza(in a sarcastic tone): does this friend have a name dear?
Mystique:

Addictv
25 Feb 2008 04:20

Cont frm Potash: Mandla realizing dat Bhodloza is watching them both with a curious look, he squares his shoulders, feigns a smile and extends his hand to shake Mystique's manicured hand. "Tis great to finally meet you Mrs Bhodloza, I cant shake this feeling dat I have seen your face somewhere, but I cant figure out where....oh well it will come to me.

I get dat all the time, guess I have one of those familiar faces, says Mystique smiling back, I am glad we finally met, my husband has told me nothing bt gud thingz about your work.

Mystique, turns to her husband, who has been watching dis perculiar exchange . "Darling, we shud get going...we running late as it is. Twaz gud meeting u once again, Mandla is it?

Addictv
25 Feb 2008 04:24

Gues my pc is slow,.... okay lets go with yo storyline vutmi....

Toxic
25 Feb 2008 04:26

Cont from Potash:

Mandla: "No this can't be, it is impossible. Is it her?" In the mean time, Mystique slowly makes her way to her husband and Bhodloza and a thousand thoughts are racing through her mind. She decides at the very last minute to pretend she has never seen this man and gives him a polite smile.....a smile that never quite reaches her eyes.

As she extends her hand to shake Bhodloza's hand, he suddenly recalls where he knows her from and jerks his hand away with a look of horror in his eyes...

Toxic
25 Feb 2008 04:29

mine too Addictv :p

belz
25 Feb 2008 04:33

Cont from Vutmi

Mandla: If you'll please excuse me i jsut need to say hello to that guy over there, havent seen him in a while. M'am it was nice seeing you again.
Mr Bhodloza is fuming because he can see what is going on, but because he abuses her at home, he jsut plays it cool coz he knows ukuthi endlini he'll beat the living daylights out of her, Mystique is just thinking why the hell did i do this...... meanwhile Mandla is jsut..........................

Vutmi
25 Feb 2008 04:42

cont from belz
meanwhile Mandla is jsut.......saddened by the look on Mystique's face. She looked terrified by Mr Bhondloza. I hope I didnt get her into trouble. There's something fragile about her.
Meanwhile back @ Bhodloza & Mystique.....

Kim Possible
25 Feb 2008 05:02

Cont from Vutmi

Bhodloza: I didnt like the way you looked at Mandla....
Mystique: What do you mean??? ( in a soft voice)
Bhodloza: Dont interrupt me Woman (raising his voice & looking around if maybe theres someone looking at them)
Mystique: Im sorry i didnt mean to offend you but i was trying to be....
Bhodloza: That's it another word from you i'll - raising his hand for a good slap but then hesitated...
Bhodloza: Get in the car NOW....
Mystique: terrified of what's going on in her husband's mind......so are we still going for that evening meeting @ the hotel - trying to share meaningless conversation wif her husband....
Bhodloza: not saying a word to his wife...he cant shake the feeling there's something not adding up between his wife & Mandla....

Vutmi
25 Feb 2008 05:12

cont from Kim
Angelou/Mandla was watching the scene from the distance and he couldnt believe what he saw...he was horrified when he saw Bhodloza lifting a hand tio his wife.

Act 1 Scene 2 (Bodloza's offices, the next day(monday))

MAndla/Angelou just walked in

Addictv
25 Feb 2008 05:40

Mandla walks into Bhodloza's office and greets him nonchalantly .

Morning Boss...how was da weekend?

Bhodloza doesnt even look up, mumbles something Mandla doesnt catch.

Mandla: Did u say something, boss?

Bhodloza: I said close da door on your way out, and dont disturb me again am busy.

Mandla can sense da tension, but doesnt know what to say...he walks out of the office.....and make's himself a cup of coffee.

He sits on his desk drinking coffee, wondering what happened to Mystique dat day….wishing he cud phone her….and find out.

Meanwhile Mystique, is in a panick becoz she doesnt know what Mandla might reveal to her suspicious husband.

She picks up da phone, and dials a number......and

Vutmi
25 Feb 2008 07:46

cont from Addictiv

Mandla(answering the phone): Mr Zungu's office hello?
Mystique: Good-day, is this Mandla/Angelou
MAndla(he recognises the voice and he gets nervous): Yes Mrs Zungu, i'll put you through to Mr Zungu...
Mystique:wait mandla...ui actually want to talk to you.
Angelou: To me? About what mam
Mystique: We cant taklk over the phone, can you Meet me at Jiggle's around 5 tonite?
Angelou/Mandla: I..I..I...
Mystique: great, c u there. (She hangs up)

belz
25 Feb 2008 07:53

And as she put the phone down, she realised just how risky this was going to be. Remembering the main reason she got married to Bhodloza, that its not worth it now,she tells herself what the hell, im gonna go and Mandla no matter what it takes!!

Golden Star
25 Feb 2008 10:07

Meanwhile at the scrap yard Sgoloza the "chief" mechanic has just finished stripping parts off Charity's Toyota Conquest which was in an accident. Sgoloza is tall, dark and not so handsome. He's not exactly slender, has long not so clean nails and has plum tinted long relaxed hair which he sometimes plaits. Charity is a teacher at the local primary school and is the best friend of Sgoloza's on and off girlfriend Busi. Charity's always had a thing for Sgoloza. Charity wants to know how much she's getting for the car.

Charity: Sgo tell me how much I'm getting for my car. Phela I need to use the money to buy a 2002 Toyota Corolla. I'm upgrading!
Sgoloza: Eish my sister that's nice. A Corolla?
Charity: You can take the Corolla for a spin if you want...but on one condition.
Sgoloza: [smiling like a fool and all 3 of his gold teeth showing] What's the condition?
Charity: [smiling wickedly] You sleep over at my house for a week and you can test drive me as much as you want. The only reason I'm Busi's friend is because I want to be close to you. I don't know what the hell you see in her.
Sgoloza: Huh...?

Out of the blue Busi shows up. Charity sees the expression on Busi’s face and realizes she’s heard everything…

mazemnyama
25 Feb 2008 11:20

cont from vutmi
mandla cant imagine why mystique would want to meet him, he had almost put her out of his mind. afterall that is what they were supposed to do. they were supposed to forget everything and start afresh. now ten years later she dares to call him . mandla knew their boss SEGALE MOGOTSI would not like this. he had trained them so well and they knew how to follow orders from him. infact they were trained to follow his orders.
mandla decides to sort this woman out, warn her atleast. so he locks up his bosses office and prepares to leave. on his way out he grabs his sunglasses eish that ma agnes always uses mac-mac to wash her clothes. sunglasses on he walks to the taxi rank to catch a taxi to jiggles, thankful that he is not wearing a min iskirt.

joy
26 Feb 2008 05:52

lol@mazemnyama, ma agnes, mac mac mac, hahahaha, ja its all ugwebu (bubbles) and no substance! advertising, ha-ah
segale mogosi, new boss?? what a twist!

Vutmi
26 Feb 2008 08:45

i am confused yet i am the director!!!!

now ten years later she dares to call him ....ten years? how old is mandla?

mandla knew their boss SEGALE MOGOTSI...i thought the boss is Mr Bhodloza Zungu

thankful that he is not wearing a min iskirt...is he now a cross dresser?

scripwritting team, put your heads together now, Generubbish is catching on.

mabhebheza
26 Feb 2008 12:20

LOL..i think my writing skill are needed..very interesting so far ..!! ITs so scary i actualy have visuals of Mandla and the crew..hi hi soapy life !!

KeleFabulous
26 Feb 2008 12:38

ROTFCMAO

whoo haai guys what happened na? yho! the only thing i can think now is MAC MAC MAC MAC and that stupid advert with the sunglasses...mx! LOL

mazemnyama
27 Feb 2008 02:45

k will explain
mandla is old kaloku like slu well maybe younger than slu
kaloku mandla had a life b4 he worked eparadise land he was a whatever and that is where he knows mystique from.
mr Bhodloza is his present boss. Segale Mogotsi was his boss b4 aye e paradise land.I know Segale Mogotsi is just my fascination mara ke he had to feature in somewhere didnt he.
the mini skirt thing, didnt you hear of the gals who got attacked in some taxi rank coz they were wearing miniskirts well mandla is walking to the taxi rank and shame ubhuti wabantu was trying to b funny dont know why but dont hate the brother.
he is as manly, handsome as they come

hope i cleared up all gengerubbish but if not then let the creative team fix this mess up

Kim Possible
27 Feb 2008 07:53

creative team fix this mess up - WHERE DO I START - LOL

Toxic
27 Feb 2008 08:25

cont from Belz.

As Mandla puts the phone down, he casts a nervous glance at Bodloza's door and wonders about his future at this company [COMPANY NAME?]. He can't shake off this nagging feeling in the pit of his stomach that Bodloza is hatching a plan to get rid of him. Mandla is torn between wanting to protect Mystique after the fear and sadness he witnessed in her eyes last night and displaying his loyalty to Bodloza who has been good to him.

With these thoughts running in his head, he cannot concentrate on his work and suddenly Bodloza opens his door and calls him in. With sweaty palms, he stands up and glances out the window to see Busi pulling Charity's hair. Hmmm, just the distraction I need, he thinks to himself.

Vutmi
28 Feb 2008 06:02

cont from Toxic

Scene: outside the window

Charity(screaming): yo mama yo, you hurting me u stipid bitch
Busi(pulling harder): t'will teach you to stay away from others people's husbands you hussy...

Back to the office:
Bondloza(in a sarcastic voice): now will be the right time Mandla
Mandla(tearing himself away from the window): yes sir, i'll be right there.
he follows Bodloza to the office. when he gets there Bodloza closes the door with his remote and...

Sam2say
28 Feb 2008 06:06

Mina I've lost the plot

Potash
28 Feb 2008 06:55

cont frm Vutmi

And he tells Mandla to pull up a seat. Mandla does as his told and pulls up a chair.
Boss: " the reason I have called you in Mandla is because you and I have sumthing important to discuss."
Mandla starts panicking he's thinking (What was I thinking, I knew I cudnt get away with this. I shud have suspected that Bhodloza knew the truth about me and Mystique. S***, how am I gonna wangle my way out of this one, S***, S***, S***. Man how cud u have been so stupid, but Mystique is also partly to blame, shes the one who called me, not the other way around..)

Boss: "What is the matter son, have I spooked you"'
Mandla: "Nnnnnooo, Mr Bhodloza Sssir, I am just tired".
Boss: "Oh i c, Now tell me, do you like working for this company?"
Mandla: "Yes boss, I do"
Boss:"Now u know I don't like tardy work? right"
Mandla: "Yes I know that boss, has my work been tardy, thats y u called me in?"
Boss:"Let me finish, "
As their talking, Mandlas office fone start ringing.
"Prrrrr prrrr, prrrr prrrr",
Mandla: " Can I go answer that boss, it might be a potential customer"
Boss: "No it will divert to my fone, I'll answer it".

Meanwhile Mystique is puzzled to y Mandla is not picking up. She was calling him to tell him she has changed the venue for their meeting.
Just as she is about to hang up Bhodloza picks it up.
Bhodloza" Bhodloza Trading, how may I help you"
Mystique: "hi Mandla this is mystique, I'm calling to tell u that our meeting venue has changed to the Kiss Kiss club in town, I know Bhodlozas croonies dont hang around those areas, mandla r u listining?"

Just at that time Mandla sees his boss turn hot with fury, he then sees him going for the safe and...........

Kim Possible
28 Feb 2008 07:13

Cont from Potash

return to his office , by the way where were we Mandla?? Boss you were telling me about work , yes what about it, mmm Sir (stuttering) , Bholdloza you are not listen to me....is there maybe some place you are in a hurry to go...No Boss....Mandla's phone rings again........Bhodloza no its fine you can answer it here....

Mystique: Mandla is that you???
Mandla : Yes why , ( clearing his throat) we cant rite now im in a meeting...

Bhodloza is acting cool & calm - but inside he is fuming......what did he take in the safe???.....

watever
28 Feb 2008 07:28

cont from kim

mystique: r u wit him
mandla: yes
mystique: i think i was very reckless en we need to change the venue asap
mandla: really?, i didnt notice, yah?
mystique: old park station, behind it, that place wer da street adults live, dress shabby, 6pm sharp

Vutmi
28 Feb 2008 07:49

Just as she is about to hang up Bhodloza picks it up.
Bhodloza" Bhodloza Trading, how may I help you"
Mystique: "hi Mandla this is mystique, I'm calling to tell u that our meeting venue has changed to the Kiss Kiss club in town, I know Bhodlozas croonies dont hang around those areas, mandla r u listining?"....OUCHHHHH, TOO BAD SHE CANT RECOGNISE HER HUBBY'S VOICE.

Vutmi
05 Mar 2008 03:18

cont from watever

mystique: old park station, behind it, that place wer da street adults live, dress shabby, 6pm sharp
Mandla: of course sir, will send you the quotation right away.
Bhodloza: what was that about?
Mandla: Oh that, just a client who wanted a quotation.
Bhodloza: whatever, listen i will need you here tonigh at 6, i have a business meeting with some fellas and i'll need ur help.
Mandla: (stammering) but...bbbbut...but boss, i already have plans for today.
Bhodloza: I m not asking you Angelou, i am telling you. (he picks up his phone and go, living Mandla flubbergusted(excuse the spelling))

meanwhile...

scene: scrapyard, Sgoloza, Charity and Busi. Busi has a generous chunk of Charity's weeve in her hands.

Sgoloza: WTF are you doing woman?
Busi: Shut up you spineless excuse of a man...i am teaching this bitch to respect other women's men. (to charity)...you better get out of here before i rip off the rest of that cheap weave off. as for you (pointing at Sgoloza), i will see you at home, you better have dinner ready. Idiot. (she shakes her bootylicious self and leaves)

sponono
05 Mar 2008 03:51

cont from Vutmi
Sgoloza and Busi at home...

Sgoloza....ok now you gonna tell me exactly what you said to me at the scrapyard
Busi>>>>please baba kaTotoloz i just wanted to scare that biatch
Sgoloza yanks her throwing her across the floor with her big boobs popping out
Busi starts shouting....yiiiii yiiiiiiiiii why must you always hit me when you;ve been galavanting with women all over..yiiiiiiiiiiiiiii yiiiiiiiiiiiiii
Sgoloza now starts kicking her "yeah I'll show you whos the man now...repeat your words"
Busi>. yiiiiii yiiiiiiiiiiii i'm going to Kito right now to report you I'm tired of your beating....(
Kito is the local polie station named afta the Station Commander who takes no-nonsense)

she grabs her boobs and shifts them into place and dashes out of the door living Sgoloza puffing and huffing...."come back woman come back"

Nonny
05 Mar 2008 04:13

LOL, Sponza......at the name Baba ka Totoloz.............shame man, I hope that name doesn't take a literal meaning on the child............hihii

sponono
05 Mar 2008 04:20

Nonny...u totoloz phela ufuze uyise...so thats why they nicknamed him tha and thats why uSgoloza enesbhaxu u-insecure ngenxa yetotoloz..hi hi hi

Nonny
05 Mar 2008 04:26

Oh Sponono, thanks for enlightening me about u totoloz..........eish nawe wavele wangicebake ukuthi angazi noma kuyagenwa or kuyaphunya kulesistori senu, that's why ngivele ngiyicrosse le article mengiyibona...........LOL

Birdine
10 Jun 2008 06:46

Hello I am new on the site, this article caught my eye as I am intrested in Scripts and good stroy lines. Very creative. I notice it says part 2, where can I get part 1. please help a newbie.

Toxic
10 Jun 2008 07:13

Birdline click HERE
http://www.tvsa.co.za/default.asp?blogname=storybook&ArticleID=7214

Birdine
10 Jun 2008 08:37

Oh Thank You Toxic. I am going there right now.

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